Music was good
The thought backing the rest of the film was not.
Music was good
The thought backing the rest of the film was not.
Film. LOL.
The animation was decent
The ending was not. Why is this rated E if you have that there?
I know it was stupid.
I don't know.
Animation was decent
But what's with the obscenities and music? It makes no sense and it feels tacked on.
Lacking any cohesion or thought
After I realized it looped, I went "Hey look, it's the X button!"
Not only are the drawings sloppy, but the idea behind it isn't well though out. Why does that guy point out the monkey? Why are we watching the monkey? Why does his laser attack not do anything?
There's nothing back it up.
Has potential
The animation was cohesive and the story was decent. Maybe if you added more jokes, focused less on reading, and more on what the characters were acting out, it would improve it. I'd also add laughing tracks for the jokes to make it more believable.
Decent
The vending machines look nicely drawn, but the characters were not inspiring. You have a good concept, and I would advise that you animate the characters moving Frame-by-Frame to make the scene more believable.
Nothing to write home about
I don't understand what you were trying to go for here. All I see is a Lego character being cut in half, and then an episode of Dragon Ball Z which I can look up on Youtube. At the very least, it would have been interesting to see some Flash effects mixed in with the lego stop motion.
Words cannot describe how awesome this is
So take a number 10 instead
Adorable
Great music, and I love the art style. Are you using colored pencil or something?
5 emotions in 20 seconds
First, I was intrigued, then I was humored, then I was sad that it ended, then I was excited to read that there's a part 2, and now I'm anxious to see it! Great animation!
Animator/Musician
Joined on 2/8/11